Crimes in Copy Cosmetics

Good copy also has to have good copy design (aka cosmetics). Two key purposes of copy cosmetics are:

  • Make the copy easier and faster to read
  • Emphasize important points you want the reader to “get”

So here are some common crimes I see when I’m reviewing copy:

ALL CAPS. It’s fine to use all caps for a single word you really want to pop. But stick to title caps (just the first letter of each word) when it comes to headlines, sub-heads and long phrases. Technically, all caps is considered “shouting,” which of course is not nice to do. But more important, it’s hard for the eye to read.

Too much bold. Think of bold as a spice. As an accent, it makes key points or phrases stand out. Use it too much though and you overwhelm the soup–nothing stands out.

Italics. On a web screen, italics are hard to read. So you should never use italics for something important. But they’re good for pre-heads (the line at the very top, above the headline on a sales page) or subtly making individual words stand out.

In fact, if there was such a thing as a standout-o-meter, I’d put ALL CAPS first (most eye-catching and impactful), bold second, and italics third. So think about the level of emphasis you really want to give something before you choose.

Highlighting. Personally, I hate highlighting. It hurts my eyes so I don’t read it. Supposedly, it increases conversions. But informal polls I’ve taken suggest many other women feel the same. At some point, I’ll test whether there’s a gender bias with it. In the meantime, if you use it, use it sparingly.

Underlining.  Underlining is great for printed materials. Problem is–in the online world–we’ve become Pavlovian clickers. We see an underline and think it’s something to click. And we’re kind of annoyed when it’s not. So I’d avoid it online or in html emails.

Grey, blue or any other color font for the main text. Sorry designers, but all the research I’ve seen shows black is the hands down, far and away best font color for your main text. And boring old white is the most readable background. Anything else, and you start losing readability. That’s ok in small doses. But not for the majority of your text.

Paragraphs that are waaaay too long. John Carlton talks about eye relief and how we need alot more of it when we’re reading on a screen. So forget what your grammar teacher said about having at least 3 sentences in a paragraph. In emails, keep paragraphs to a max of 3-4 lines, and max 4-5 lines for a web page.

So keep these principals in mind next time you’re writing and you’ll avoid getting a citation for crimes in copy cosmetics!

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Taking the Mystery Out of List Buying – Part 5

How to Avoid Ticking Off Your Internet Host (& the Law)

In this series on list-buying, we’ve covered mailing list basics, who to buy a list from, questions to ask before buying a mailing list, and why you need to approach email list services with caution. For the final episode, we’re talking about how to get good quality email lists.

Like most things, the surest way to avoid trouble is abstinence. But aside from that, the first thing you need to know is what kind of list you need:

  • Just a straight rental of email addresses fitting a certain set of qualifications, similar to mailing lists, or
  • An appended email list. This is when you give an appending firm your customers’ mailing addresses and ask them to find you their emails.

And then you know what to look for. Legitimate e-mail rental firms…

Provide only real addresses obtained through confirmed opt-in (COI). Not opt-in or double opt-in (which they often distort the meaning of) but COI. And they can provide documentation on how they obtained permission to contact those people on behalf of other advertisers. (Get a copy and keep it for your files.)

Protect their lists by never actually giving you the list. Unlike postal lists, legit firms will ask for your copy and insist on sending it out for you. But this is a good thing—if the list is bad, they’re the ones dealing with the ISP issues. Plus, it boosts the credibility of your message when the company the person opted-in with says, “Here’s something we think you might like.”

Cite reasonable response rates, which are much lower for rented email lists than USPS mail lists. The average success rate is 0.25%. If you get 1%, it’s time to break out the champagne.  Remember, people change email addresses much more frequently than they move and tend to have multiple email address they rarely check.

Quote prices near current averages. Email lists are much more expensive than mailing lists. Worlddata says the average cost per thousand (CPM) for a permission-based consumer email list is about $125, while permission-based business-to-business email lists run about $285 CPM.  Obviously, prices will vary. But it’s safe to say a legit firm will not sell you a CD of 1 million emails for $99.

For appended email lists, look at pricing and promised match rates:

  • Industry veterans say a match rate—or percentage of postal addresses they’re able to find e-mail addresses for—will rarely be above 35%. So be wary of those who promise higher.
  • Also, prices for appending are quoted by the match, which can range from 15 cents to 50 cents each. If they’re quoting 2 cents a match, something is definitely up.

Where to Go

When buying email lists, a reputable broker is probably the best way to go. One rental company used by some top marketers use is Venture Direct Worldwide. For email appenders, Direct magazine recently cited FreshAddress, Walter Karl, and TowerData as firms with a good sources.

Of course, there are frequent debates about whether even legitimate email list rental and appending is actually a violation of privacy, CAN-SPAM, marketing best practices, etc. But at the moment, that decision is still yours to make.

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Taking the Mystery Out of List Buying – Part 4

Email Lists–Proceed With Caution

So now we’ve covered mailing list basics, who to buy a list from, and questions to ask before buying a mailing list…and it’s time to move on to email lists.

While you should be cautious when buying any type of mailing list, your inner Nancy Drew or Hardy boy needs to go into overdrive when it comes to email addresses because there are a lot more hazards to navigate.

If you mail to a bunch of outdated home addresses or people who aren’t interested, the cost of all that wasted printing and postage is pretty much the only price you’ll pay. (Unless you’re mailing something illegal or fraudulent, of course. But I’m assuming none of you fall into that category.)

But it’s a whole different ball game with emails. That’s because:

  1. Sending emails to a bunch of bad addresses will sound the alarms at your internet service provider (ISP)—who will usually blacklist your IP address and terminate your service. Once you’re blacklisted, most ISPs will block all your emails to customers, prospects, even your mom.
  2. People are WAY touchier about unwanted emails. And many email programs make it super easy to report your unwanted email as spam. Studies show some people think it’s just easier (and safer, if your email appears shady) to report you as a spammer than to unsubscribe. If too many to do… then see #1 above.
  3. Scammers abound in the email list industry. Search online, you’ll find unbelievable stories of fraudulent email list companies selling lists they don’t actually have. And of course, they nearly always claim to have opt-in or even double opt-in email addresses that aren’t—causing you to run afoul of the CAN-SPAM law.

And now, finally, we’ll wrap up the list buying series next time by talking about how you can go about buying legit email lists.

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Tweetdivas Behind the Scenes at Krispy Kreme

Last Tuesday, we had a Tweetdivas gathering to go behind the scenes at a local Krispy Kreme. And I couldn’t help but notice a few takeaway marketing lessons…

Have an urgent call-to-action…as far as prompting impulse purchases–the “Hot Donuts Now” sign pretty much takes the cake. (You can groan.) Here’s a tip though: most locations though do have set hours that hot donuts are available. In this store it’s 6am to 11 am and after 5pm.

Entertain your customers…factory stores typically showcase the production (aka Donut-Making Theater, according to the KK website) behind large glass windows so store visitors can watch the donuts being made…plus it reinforces the company’s commitment to quality and freshness.

Enter the conversation in the customer’s head…by making different shapes of donuts for various holidays and special events. I was surprised to hear that Valentine’s Day is actually a big seller for them. They’re also encouraging repeat purchases by offering free packs of Valentine cards–each one doubling as a coupon for a free donut. And of course, who’s going to come back and get just one donut?!

Focus on your strengths…they sell donuts and coffee. Period. At one point, the company experimented with adding other food to the menu. But like Starbucks’ failed attempts at adding breakfast sandwiches, it didn’t fly.

Customize your offerings to your market…the original glazed donut is by far the best seller in every location, our tour guide said–with chocolate glazed a distant second. But beyond that, it varies by geographic location. In our Raleigh store, the raspberry-filled are the third best selling.

Give the customers what they want…customers wanted donut holes and in 2005 KK began making them–separately. You see, the top-secret donut shaper (which no one is allowed to video or photograph) creates the donuts in the typical donut ring shape, with the hole already there. So the “holes” became just another shape of donut they offered.

Get involved with the community…back in the 1950′s KK began making discounted donuts available to schools and non-profits for fundraising. Last year they helped various groups raise $30 million dollars. This particular store helped a bunch of NC State students raise nearly $40,000 for the Children’s Hospital of NC last weekend with the Krispy Kreme Challenge.

(By the way, the video was taken by @wiggitywack, who works for www.MyNC.com. And it was her first video report ever!)

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Raleigh Twestival Funds 20 Years of Water for 130 People

Speaking of Twitter…the power of social media was channeled toward a social cause last Thursday via the Twestival–185 cities across the globe all holding a tweetup to raise money for charity:water.


charity: water for Twestival from charity: water on Vimeo.

I actually worked on the launch of a new mutual fund a few months back, the Calvert Global Water Fund, which invests in companies and technologies that are enabling access to clean water around the globe in a responsible way (there are a number of human rights and environmental issues that can come into play). So I was quite familiar with shocking statistics such as:

  • One in six people around the world don’t have access to safe, clean drinking water
  • On average, women in Africa and Asia walk 3.7 miles a day to collect water
  • 80% or all sickness in the developing world is due to water-related disease

And that’s also why I felt I had to attend. charity:water focuses on drilling wells in places where water exists underground but access doesn’t.  100% of Twestival tickets went to charity:water, and 100% of their donations go directly to building wells.

The Raleigh Twestival was well-attended and raised more than $2,600–which can provide 130 people in a developing nation clean water for 20 years. Global totals for the event are still being counted.

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More Copywriting Tips on Twitter

In case you missed them…here were this week’s marketing tips on Twitter:

  • Anytime you can be specific boosts credibility and makes your message more memorable. #CopyTip
  • You have less than 10 seconds to grab a web visitor’s attention. So write the headline & opening like your biz depended on it!
  • Forget offering 31 flavors–too many choices decreases response. Offer fewer choices to make more sales & faster sales. #CopyTip
  • Write down a feature then add “what that means is” and the answer will translate your feature into a benefit. #CopyTip
  • All logic and no emotion leaves you with a dull pile of unconvincing facts. #CopyTip

To get yours as they go out, simply follow me on Twitter and look out for the hastag #CopyTip.

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Taking Mystery Out of List Buying – Part 3

7 Must-Ask Questions Before Buying a List

So now that you know mailing list basics and who to buy a list from, here are some key questions to ask to make sure you’re getting the best possible list for your mailing.

  1. Exactly who is on the list? Quality wise, buyers are better than inquirers who are better than compiled names.
  2. What is the deliverability rate? People who don’t receive your mailing can’t respond. Aim for lists that guarantee deliverability of 96% or above.
  3. How old are the names on the list? How often is it updated? Obviously, the more recent the names and more frequently it’s updated the better.
  4. How often it cleaned? And when was the last cleaning? “Cleaning” a list means it’s been run through the USPS National Change of Address file. Again, more recent and frequent will reduce the number of pieces returned to you.
  5. If it’s a list of purchasers, how recent was the purchase? And what was the average purchase size? Contrary to expectations, recent purchasers are more likely to buy similar products. And you certainly don’t want an average purchase size that’s much less than what you’re promoting.
  6. How often has the list been rented? A list that’s rented too often can hurt your response. On the flip side, if it’s never rented there’s probably a very good reason.
  7. How many other mailers have tested the list? And how many continued with the list after the test? Obviously, continuation is a good sign. An even better sign is if renters “rolled out” their mailing to the entire list.

Remember, whether you buy from a list broker or list manager, they get paid by the list owner. That means you are the only one putting your best interests first. So if they try to dodge a question, keep pressing until you get an answer.

Next up, what to know when buying email marketing lists.

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5 Ways to Get More Clients Now…Without Cutting Your Prices

It’s true—the economy has certainly seen better days. But that just means you’ve got to get tougher and smarter when it comes to building your business. Break out of the marketing rut you’ve fallen into and try new strategies that will get more work in the door quickly. And resist that desperate, dangerous impulse to discount your products and services.

The best way to start is to join me for a FREE teleseminar where you’ll discover:

  • Why price cuts are never truly temporary—and better ways to get them to act now
  • The one question that can instantly shrink the mountain before you…and dramatically reduce your stress
  • 5 easy strategies for landing new clients and new business in 2 weeks or less

I hope you’ll join us:

February 25th at 1PM EST

Of course, if you can’t make the actual call I’ll send the recording out afterward. So register now before you get busy and forget!

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Taking the Mystery Out of List Buying — Part 2

How to Rent a Killer Mailing List

If you want to grow your own “house” list or promote your services to a sea of new faces, renting a mailing list can be smart way to go. And as I said in Lists 101, it’s probably not as expensive as you think. And you can do it yourself or get some help.

List Brokers
With access to thousands of lists, a good list broker can be an invaluable help in getting the right one for your needs.  The good news is it doesn’t cost you anything to use a list broker because they are paid by the list owner (the company who supplied the data for the list). But, like any industry, you need to choose carefully so you avoid the bad apples.

If possible, look for a broker who is a member of the Direct Marketing Association and who has experience in the markets you’re trying to reach. If you’re looking for compiled lists, two brokers with a good reputation are InfoUSA and Melissa Data. Another resource for finding list brokers is the Direct Marketing Association’s vendor search site.

Do-it-Yourself
If you have a crystal clear idea of the type of list you’re looking for, you can also do the legwork and go to the list manager directly. The best place to start is to look at the SRDS Direct Mail List Directory, which is available in the reference section of many public and business school libraries. (There is an online version, but it’s pricey if you don’t need lists often.)

The SRDS contains information on every commercially available mailing list by category. Find a list you’re interested in then contact its list broker or manager. Often, you can get the information you need—the list’s Data Card & Usage Report—on the company’s website. Otherwise, just call and ask for it.

The Data Card tells you how each list was developed, the number of addresses on it, what the average purchase price is (if it’s a buyers’ list), the price to rent the list, and other important information.

The Usage Report tells you who has used the list. A “C” after a company’s name is a good sign because it means they’ve used the list more than once—obviously, no one would pay to re-use a list that bombed.

As we discussed before, magazines and trade associations can be good list sources as well. Just go to their website and search for “list rental.” Also, BtoB Magazine has an online directory of publications and associations by industry .

Next up, 7 Must-Ask Questions Before Buying a List.

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Confusion, Captions & More in This Week’s Tips

And now, for this week’s copy tips:

  • A confused mind never buys. Clear, simple writing outsells clever and “sophisticated” any day. #CopyTip
  • Add meaningful captions to your pictures. Captions are the third most read item on a sales page. #CopyTip
  • Be careful to avoid words that make your product or service sound hard or time consuming. #CopyTip
  • Forget adjectives–focus on finding colorful, active verbs for tighter, more compelling copy. #CopyTip
  • Lead with the best. In a series of tips or bullets, put your best one first or they may not bother to read the rest. #CopyTip
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