Good copy also has to have good copy design (aka cosmetics). Two key purposes of copy cosmetics are:
- Make the copy easier and faster to read
- Emphasize important points you want the reader to “get”
So here are some common crimes I see when I’m reviewing copy:
ALL CAPS. It’s fine to use all caps for a single word you really want to pop. But stick to title caps (just the first letter of each word) when it comes to headlines, sub-heads and long phrases. Technically, all caps is considered “shouting,” which of course is not nice to do. But more important, it’s hard for the eye to read.
Too much bold. Think of bold as a spice. As an accent, it makes key points or phrases stand out. Use it too much though and you overwhelm the soup–nothing stands out.
Italics. On a web screen, italics are hard to read. So you should never use italics for something important. But they’re good for pre-heads (the line at the very top, above the headline on a sales page) or subtly making individual words stand out.
In fact, if there was such a thing as a standout-o-meter, I’d put ALL CAPS first (most eye-catching and impactful), bold second, and italics third. So think about the level of emphasis you really want to give something before you choose.
Highlighting. Personally, I hate highlighting. It hurts my eyes so I don’t read it. Supposedly, it increases conversions. But informal polls I’ve taken suggest many other women feel the same. At some point, I’ll test whether there’s a gender bias with it. In the meantime, if you use it, use it sparingly.
Underlining. Underlining is great for printed materials. Problem is–in the online world–we’ve become Pavlovian clickers. We see an underline and think it’s something to click. And we’re kind of annoyed when it’s not. So I’d avoid it online or in html emails.
Grey, blue or any other color font for the main text. Sorry designers, but all the research I’ve seen shows black is the hands down, far and away best font color for your main text. And boring old white is the most readable background. Anything else, and you start losing readability. That’s ok in small doses. But not for the majority of your text.
Paragraphs that are waaaay too long. John Carlton talks about eye relief and how we need alot more of it when we’re reading on a screen. So forget what your grammar teacher said about having at least 3 sentences in a paragraph. In emails, keep paragraphs to a max of 3-4 lines, and max 4-5 lines for a web page.
So keep these principals in mind next time you’re writing and you’ll avoid getting a citation for crimes in copy cosmetics!

The 






